These two I brought in for class. Feedback suggests that the first is the more successful concept. It communicates easily, the text makes sense and the danger to the swimmer plays on pathos. The problem with the secondary one is that although it also uses pathos, the setting in the home confuses things by taking it away from the issue. A suggestion was to set it in a workplace instead, but I feel that I'd rather develop the first idea into two different posters.
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